Aet Lindling

On a second reading I found I was kind of fond of this poem. It's got several layers, I actually thought it was about modern, bad, music when I first ...

Nope, I don’t feel it. This is emo poetry, and emo poetry is all fine for pouring out emotion and making you feel better, but it isn’t meant to be ...

Alfreto, if you've made it up, regardless of if it "could happen" or not, it isn't Non-Fiction. This is straight up Fiction. Also, don't try to explain away a good ...

Pretty much everything XYZinnia said in her review is correct except for one small mistake I want to point out: Each with a dozen curls. no more, no less. I ...

Er, you pretty much copied the idea. Chain, hair, comb... People have reused the Gift of the Magi idea, but this isn't reusing. You didn't implement it correctly, even. The ...

Demetri, you've done it again. Those commas are not meant to be there. Take them out. They're completely ridiculous. Who, threw the rock, that landed, on Jim? The rock, whose ...

Oh, my apologies for having a personality. I'll watch out for that. :) Oh, nice save. Not.

To be quite honest, this is basically one giant cliche. There are many poems that just talk about how nice things are nicer or bad things become nice when they ...

I am going to tell you my honest thoughts on this poem. I am not trying to be mean, but if I withheld what I thought just to be polite ...

Wow, people who like twilight are on this forum? Haha, it's just that I was on this other writers forum and everyone there was weird and completely jealous of stephenie ...

Offensive and stupid. Even for rap, this had no point, the rhymes were forced, and it was generally bad. You need to post 2 reviews now, which you should've done ...

This would be better as a short story or a longer and more descriptive poem. As it is, it leaves too many questions unanswered. Sometimes stories are better with questions ...

On a small note, swearing is allowed in writing (just not posts in non-writing topics), so unless you censored this because of personal beliefs or something it'd be perfectly fine ...

You need to write 2 reviews because of the 2:1 review:work rule. (Does anyone read the Rules before posting anymore?) This was okay in the beginning and middle, but the ...

An octillion and twenty-eight percent, even. You almost made me wake up my dad in convulsions of laughter, meanie. "Nice April Fool's prank. You're fired." *convulses again* No like seriously. ...